Stacey, I want to see the bottoms of the cat and dog that we talked about. The "continuity" (the path the eye will follow along shapes placed on an implied edge) at the bottom edge needs simplifying by filling out the cat/dog. Add some gestures on the arms that will direct the eye up to each tail more quickly. (not so much in and out). We talked about this.
I understand the feet, but I tried that, I have gotten from other teachers and people not in the program who I was testing it on that they didn't like it. And I did extend the arms more.
Stacey, I want to see the bottoms of the cat and dog that we talked about. The "continuity" (the path the eye will follow along shapes placed on an implied edge) at the bottom edge needs simplifying by filling out the cat/dog. Add some gestures on the arms that will direct the eye up to each tail more quickly. (not so much in and out).
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I understand the feet, but I tried that, I have gotten from other teachers and people not in the program who I was testing it on that they didn't like it. And I did extend the arms more.
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